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My Poetry - Halak Ker Diya .. !


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#1 Brother Hassan

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Posted 12 March 2012 - 10:14 AM

Here is small couplet that I've written in Urdu. I've translated it into English for the wider audience :)

Meri izzat ka aik nazar main mazak ker diya ..
Uss kai murhnai ki adaa nai ufff, halak ker diya .. !

Of my respect and standing, in one sight she made a joke ..
The way of her turning has destroyed me ufff .. !






Tell me what you think ? :)

#2 viclou

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Posted 13 March 2012 - 10:20 PM

I don't get it. :blink:

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Posted 14 March 2012 - 02:20 AM

View Postviclou, on 13 March 2012 - 10:20 PM, said:

I don't get it. :blink:
LOL that was an epic fail :P
It means that the way she turned to look at me destroyed me.

#4 Emperor360

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Posted 13 April 2012 - 06:16 AM

Still confusing! :/
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Posted 14 April 2012 - 06:29 AM

LOL :P
Maybe I should stick to technology.

#6 Emperor360

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Posted 17 May 2012 - 06:01 AM

I think so.
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Posted 27 June 2012 - 07:09 PM

qaatilana shair :P





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