HerLoss Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameClaw_268 Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Gruesome... you should right a sequel: Revenge of the dogs, or something like that. Squerrels, who would have thought... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomegamer Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 great plot and interesting you get a good grade? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HerLoss Posted April 24, 2005 Author Share Posted April 24, 2005 best grade I've got in that class. 94. but its not like I tried or even passed in any of the other projects. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomegamer Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 yeah, well i definately would like to see more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HerLoss Posted April 24, 2005 Author Share Posted April 24, 2005 Well I'll probobly add onto this one for the final draft. I kinda half assed the ending just to end it if it wasnt obvious... lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomegamer Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 well just like movies you could have the "extended version" or "Alternate endings"... some bloopers would be nice, lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
majazac Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 really good... I'm a writer (or trying to be) to. Really nice... I noticed that the end was too quick for the rest of the story... I liked AG's idea... Extended version or alternate endings.. you should definitly keep going Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HerLoss Posted May 3, 2005 Author Share Posted May 3, 2005 really good... I'm a writer (or trying to be) to. Really nice... I noticed that the end was too quick for the rest of the story... I liked AG's idea... Extended version or alternate endings.. you should definitly keep going Definitly will as soon as I stop being so lazy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
majazac Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 don't forget to send us the rest Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quantum Media LLC Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 great story. do you have the rest of it???? ever thought about being an author. let me know if you do i have a few contacts that i can hook you up with Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gma Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 Wow, this was a really old topic. More description in the story would be nice. But the idea was pretty good. Kept me interested. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AverageJoe Posted March 5, 2007 Share Posted March 5, 2007 I liked it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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